I like this idea as it has a moral behind the story which i believe can be depicted very easily from this storyboard and that is that trying and perseverence are the key to getting better at everything. I think i need to change some of the views as i repeat some of the views and they do not portray as much after several shots are the same and also some of the images are a bit flat and don't come out at the audience and so they may not get what the point is of it being there
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