From doing this storyboard i have realised i have slightly missed out a few scenes and believe that the story needs a bit more umph behind it in terms of the attic as intially i was thinking of it as a metaphor and a box being like an attic to the robot. I feel it needs to be a real loft as if he has truely been locked away. Also i believe i will change the ending because it seems like this story could just go round in a cycle with the robot escaping.
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